by Gemmie Lou Apr 8, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I’ve been trying not to love you |
I really enjoyed this; sweet and to the point. loved the way you twisted it and changed the entire essence of the poem with the end. Very nicely done! |
by shannon
wow.. i loved this poem alot. a 5/5 |
by Liam
brilliant, really cant fault it, good twist at the end to |