This is a real good poem! If I was writing a poem like this then I would be tempted to rip into the person, but I like the way you're almost giving them advice to help them along. Real nice tecnique, and I reall y like the repettitive flow of it. Take care x x x

Very well put! A jealous friend there is nothing worse. I can relate to this poem! Very well written and what a good message it sends! Take Care! Brooke

wow i enjoyed reading this i liked ur rhyming and ur style. great poem. take care.

i liked your poem..pretty good