Emotionless Man

by Heather M Craig   Apr 9, 2005


You are the theif of my smile,
the match that ignites my fire,
the brush that paints my tears,
the murderer of my living desire.

I am the punching bag
that takes your emotional beats,
No sense in trying for
it is a battle I can't defeat.

You are the rain in my sunshine,
no sense to even bother...
it's neverending, the pain you give!
--the strife of an emotionless father!

Heather M Craig

--Really, not something I like, I just wrote it out of tears tonight of the way my dad was treating me with his friends around.--

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  • 19 years ago

    by Lithium

    thats so mean of him, good on u writing a poem about it luv sam xox

  • 19 years ago

    by christina

    oh hunz that was sooo sad :'( ..... im sorry abt that
    it was a gr8 poem
    and hey im here for u if u need to talk ok :)
    love ya hunz take caree
    always smile
    peaceee

  • 19 years ago

    by codey

    hey, that was a really good poem, its tyms like these im glad i dnt have a dad, im feel so sorry for you, keep writting and take care

    xXxLoVe FrOm CoDeYxXx

  • 19 years ago

    by Izzo

    hey, that totally sux. fathers should not treat you like that. i can really feel the emotion, esp in the first stanza. def like it, even though it is from a not so kewl experience.

  • 19 years ago

    by Carrie

    Hey there Heather,
    I know your father does love you very much! He may not show it but he truely does. I am sorry he may not show it to you, but deep down inside he loves you more than anything in the world! Dont be to hard on urself, you didn't do a single thing wrong. He just has to learn how to love. Thats all! Just remind him everyday how much he means to you and how you love him so much. That should make him see his mistakes! Great poem!!!

    ♥ Always,
    Carrie

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