Just Emptyness

by †XGothicXMiseryX†   Apr 9, 2005


I think I lose my heart
Or maybe it just teared apart
I can’t feel anymore
I feel like a withered rose
That has been blown by the wind
And has been left just with sins

I’m left without soul
In a place unknown
My soul is gone
I can’t care anymore
I feel like dust
I am so lost
Dust that never disappears
And that only carries fears

I don’t have a mind
But nothing can seem to be left behind
I feel like a drop of blood
That goes around on and on
A drop of blood that doesn’t leaves
Even if it doesn’t wants to exist

I don’t have my sight
So I don’t know what’s right
I feel like a puppet
I can’t even watch the sunset!

I don’t got anything left
Just because of my selfishness
Now I have just emptiness…

*hey can u plz rate and comment this poem?...u dont have a clue of wat this poem means 2 me!!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    WOW... ummm... thats.... WOW... so yeah im pretty speechless that was an amazing poem, the emotions are so powerful its crazy... very very good... 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by love06

    heyy i think it was a great poem... can relate to u alot 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Chelsea

    hey..
    you said this poem meant something to you and i know how that can be
    i think you really have a talent at writing
    this was an awsum poem 5/5 no doubt
    text me back chels xox

  • 19 years ago

    by Titan

    thats an awesome poem! i felt that way 4 the longest time. u have an awesome way of turning a poem into an awesome work of literery artwork.

  • 19 years ago

    by .

    good poem 5/5
    thanks for the comment