wow...with you...symptoms are so deep, and something is very wrong. someone treated you badly at some point. nothing is complete and no where to belong? please excuse my poor grasp of english, i grew in many different countries. you are quite brilliant, i hope you continue to write.

Hmmm.. Interesting poem.. I must say, however, that it is definately not one of your best. Still good, but not grand.

Different from what I've been reading. I liked it. Nice work. >3jess