Comments : Mum

  • 19 years ago

    by Liam

    another great one Gemma, cant really fault it, good variation in rhyme

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    The idea was great and I've felt the same too. I thought the part "I'm not the right size..." something like that was great! I love it, keep on writing.
    Satuxxa

  • 19 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    Good poem....I liked it, and I think many people will be able to identify with it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    Again, you've packed every word full of meaning, and I can definitely relate.

    I absolutely loved this part:
    If you'd hit me people would see,
    but my bruises are on the inside where only I can see.

    So very meaningful!
    5/5.