awww...this is a magnificent write hun...you are just sooo incredible...your writings are so amazing <33...i hope someday i can write as good as you...i mean it <3 i love ya hun.....i love this entire poem, but i think my fav verse was this one:

"Bloodshot and teary eyed
I look toward the sky
Something inside me feeling so wrong
Oh how it’s been too long"

:) magnificent hun...love ya xxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

Wow, this is a fantastic poem. So beautifully written and so sad, too!! You did a great job hun.

Love much,
Tiff