Wow!! That was such a great way to write a poem, with the questions, I enjoyed reading it so much, even though it was so sad. I loved the lines...'Why is it that I am only ever whole when all around is falling apart?
Why is it that I was left with a burnt and charcoaled ebony heart?'... They are so beautiful, keep it up xxx

omg, i have asked myself all these questions many times before, and even if i ever come close to the answer, it just hurts me more.
As always, this poem is beautiful and so very true. (5.5)
Love always, Lmay x

very good poem again, I am ALWAYS here, please don't forget that and never think you are alone, you mean so much to so many people, we couldn't cope without you. Well done on all your poems, keep writing