Mended (monotetra)

by Heather M Craig   Apr 9, 2005


Nestled in the goodness of care,
broken hearts in search of repair,
to theft one another's despair,
I found it there! I found it there!

The one to relight my dreams,
to rid my painful, silent screams,
the needle that patches the seams,
At last, redeemed! at last, redeemed!

Mended by the passion that lies,
all I've wanted I've realized,
founded in outlandish suprise
It's in your eyes! It's in your eyes!

Heather M Craig

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In a monotetra, each stanza contains four lines
in monorhyme. Each line is in tetrameter (four metrical feet) for a total of eight syllables. What makes
the monotetra so powerful as a poetic form, is that the last line contains two metrical feet, repeated.
It can have as few as one or two stanzas, or as many as desired.

Stanza Structure:

Line 1: 8 syllables; A1
Line 2: 8 syllables; A2
Line 3: 8 syllables; A3
Line 4: 4 syllables, repeated; A4, A4

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  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    You said you had a monotetra, so I checked it out and I must say its very good! I loved the wording you used...Wonderful, keep up the good work.
    Dorotea

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    intresting, and very good!!

    ~PLP~Lil Slam~ lots of hugs and love

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Nice to know you can write these type of poems too, i have knowledge os these writing styles, but i never try writing any such poem.
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

  • 19 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    amazing, wish i could write in a rhyme scheme like that! this amazing, A grade stuff! good one!

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Very creative format...I liked this alot! It was written beautifully~Holly