beautiful write baby :) you're such an incredible writer <3 absolutely fantastic..I hope all is well xxxx <33

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

Naive is spelled correctly , and it is an amazing poem, the ending is quite wonderful, keep it up! 5

Love Always,
Heather

Hey great poem

An amazig poem! Very well written! U are very talented! Keep posting I look forward to reading more of ur poems! Take Care! Brooke 5/5

Would u check out my newest one Set Free for me Thanx I appreciate it!

Dang!!! Dude, this is an excellent write.
It is sad the world has had constant war,
and some live in fear 24/7. With global
terrorism on the rise, fear is their game.

This line is so true, “Honor and truth
Is what we lack”
Will earth ever see just one day of peace
with man and his wars? We all hope that
day comes soon.

The last stanza say’s it all my friend.
A great write indeed, the read is fine
with rhyme and no rhyme.
Good job well done and now enjoy
a boring day and many more. ( :

So thats why you're always so bored..lol Great poem, I wrote a short story about the same thing once. You are kind of chaning your mind through the poem, and you show yourself that the boring days actually is good:)

WOW this is good logan i've been waiting for new poems from you! n this one is really g-ood! read some of mine n comment yeah! neways grreat job n take care of urself!
*-*Kat*-*

Good poem, u've got talent, keep it up.

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~