Bleeding Soul

by *~*Soldier Lover*~*   Apr 9, 2005


The hardest thing to know,
is you won't let it show.
You hide away from me,
treat me like I'm the enemy.
I know you love me,
but I can't make you see.
I return this affection,
as to me you are the closest to perfection.
I'd give anything to help you smile,
I'd run many a mile.
I see now what I have to do,
it will be painful to put you through.
But now I see it's right,
this is all I'll say before I take flight.
Lean close to my lips so,
I can tell you I have to let you go.

**This comes from within the depths of my soul, my heart bleeds and I just have to let him know.**

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  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    this was really nice the way you did it some of it was a bit choppy in the middle but you conveyed your feelings well. Left little for me to invision in my mind though I hope this helps

  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    I have a feeling who you're talking about (as i just read your post on him). Do whatever you think is right, for you and him. Good luck :)
    -A

  • 19 years ago

    by hussain

    this poem does reflect and show alot of sadness. and its very deep and powerful.hope things will be ok soon.