Brought You Back

by JustAFoolInLove   Apr 10, 2005


Thought you were done
‘Till I came along
And with just part one
Everything’s wrong

I opened up
And broke your chain
I opened my heart,
You opened your vein

I brought you here
To live in death
Now there’s a tear
For every breath

So much pain
If I could take it back
Peace I’d attain,
That’s what I lack

I’d sacrifice
My life for you
To loose your vice
And let you through

You’re almost there
So let me drown
It isn’t fair
That I hold you down

I realize now,
But much too late,
It’s all my fault;
This is your fate

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  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    How lovely!!!!! I have the HARDEST time writting poetry like this...but you seemed to maintain a steady flow of words and consistency. Bravo!

  • 19 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    omg, I love this... brilliance, as usual. I liked its overall rhythm... and I'm glad you didn't leave the site, by the way.
    Car

  • 19 years ago

    by Emma Carnage

    i liked it! very sad. lots of emotion. i'm not sure if i know who it's about.. but i still liked it very much. very good!

  • 19 years ago

    by LoÑ£ly♥P!rÄτΣ

    Aww! That was so sad. I hope that everything is ok...It was a good poem! Had alot of feeling in it...just not alot of happy feeling...Good rhyme too...
    Katie

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