Aww! That was so sad. I hope that everything is ok...It was a good poem! Had alot of feeling in it...just not alot of happy feeling...Good rhyme too...
Katie

i liked it! very sad. lots of emotion. i'm not sure if i know who it's about.. but i still liked it very much. very good!

omg, I love this... brilliance, as usual. I liked its overall rhythm... and I'm glad you didn't leave the site, by the way.
Car

How lovely!!!!! I have the HARDEST time writting poetry like this...but you seemed to maintain a steady flow of words and consistency. Bravo!