Creasy,
I think you meant read the first word in the first 3 stanzas , otherwise, it reads I love you hey...., but I know what you mean and thats very cute!!
Nice job! 5/5

With Love & Respect,
Heather Michelle Craig
~* Shaun's 4 ever *~

thanks Heather for your observation, but i did mean in the first FOUR stanzas. see its not his name, but it is what i call him. thanks for the comment and thanks for reading! :) take care.

actually i just changed it so that people won't get confused. now it says "papi" (not meaning dad) cuz i call him that.