aah! nice write, very well expressed. keep writing and keep smiling
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

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thanks for your comments and votes on my poems

this is a sweet poem. i wish i could do all those things too. i wish i could heal pain!!!!! this poem is reeeeli good keep it up coz ill b reading! u have been added to my favs! xxxxx

aww! Carlee, your'e such a great friend. Good poem!
Katie

aww thats so sweet. i love it. keep up the great work!

*jenny*

ty all!

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I understand how you felt in this poem. One of my freinds is going through a hard time and and I wish I could make it all stop or take the pain for her.
~anne~

Thanks, Anne!
car