Deep

by JustAFoolInLove   Apr 10, 2005


You pull me down
Into the night
I struggle, but
I lose the fight

Resistance is something
I just can’t use;
When I hurt deep
I can’t refuse

I go deeper
Every time
So that my feelings
Remain sublime

Without a razor
I’m just not me,
This scenario is
A catastrophe

I won’t give up
But tonight, I
Will break the struggle;
I will not try

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  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    I LOOOOOOVE this stanza--Without a razor
    I’m just not me,
    This scenario is
    A catastrophe

  • 19 years ago

    by troubled

    yet another great poem. ur waaaaay better than me lol. but u have to keep trying not to hurt. you can quit for good. i kno u can and w/o u being couragous i would prolly still be doing it too. so i have u 2 thank!
    luv ya,
    *jenny*

  • 19 years ago

    by LoÑ£ly♥P!rÄτΣ

    wow...that was really really good...but so so sad...yet again, I wish that I could help you...
    Katie

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Missing Them Already*~

    This is a great poem Zac, I really like it. But you can be you without your razor....I know its hard...I'm working with the same strugle...but keep trying hun...don't give up!!
    Love always
    Sammy

  • 19 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    You are you, with or without razor. I am more happy when you are healthy, but I love ya either way. Hot poem, buddy.
    Car

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