Excellent write. very well expressed.
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

I love this poem! For me; religeos poems open up a whole other part of you...In all your other poems, its like you see a teenage girls life...then in religeos poems, its like you see a teenage girls life...but with God. Idk...maybe I'm just crazy...but who knows. Great poem!
Katie

i dont think this poem sucks...i think its great. so keep it up.

*jenny*

I think I understand what you mean, Katie, and thank you.
Car

The message in this poem is excellent. Always remember that "all things work together for good, to them that love the Lord; to them that are called according to His purpose." It's good to have another teen putting God in their poetry.
~anne~

i think its a great poem...a lot of people complain to much its good to thank him as much as possible

Wow, thanks, guys!
Car

meaningful and wonderful. great job girl. keep it up.
much love,
marjan