Great Job..you're so right..one cruel joke or word can tear someone apart..I loved it, and I hope you got an A in you Eng class

wow i love it! so true and you really captured just about all types of girls struggling in life! i lvoe it! realistic and just wonderful!

mind if i add you to my favs? i adore all of your poems!

awesome poem! love it, i see i got some catching up to do :) but i will do it gladly:) 5/5

~PLP~ Lil slam~ lots of hugs and love :)

wow awesome i love it

What an amazing piece of art... I love the multiple views within the poem and it is well written. You have a rare and extraordinary insight. You seem to be very in touch with life and it shows.Keep writing, you're an inspiration*****

i don't think it's WEIRD, i think it's GOOD! Hey netball sounds like fun lol hope u have a safe trip hun! Thanx 4 all of the comments! So i guess i'll see u in a week. Gonna Miss Yew!!! Lotsa Luv and Be Safe!!! Peace Kal, //ari\\