by ShadowedPhoenix Apr 10, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Remember me? I am that voice, |
It's a huge job to try an fight one's inner demons. The poem reminds me of two voices (right and wrong), the devil and the angel, both struggling inside. We all have inner voice, but it is so had to always choose and listen to reasoning. Great job, loved it! |
by metuka
Great job, specially the end! I gave it 5/5 |
In this poem it's a good voice because it tells you the truth, It's that voice that everyone has that will tell them to be strong or just the truth e.g he doesn't love you etc it's more like intuition and i suppose thinking bout it, it can be good or bad but it's the voice you choose to ignore....Hope that makes sense:) |
by Kia
wow that poem is really cool.... but i got some questions.... what does this voice tell you to do... is it a good voice or a bad voice? i like the poem though great job |
by Danny
WOW! what a great poem, I love the patterm and the lexical choices are fantastic |