by Jason Meres
Everyones saying this is short and you should make it longer....however, it seems to me that it is only missing one line, the last line, as is, just doesn't seem to wrap it up. Regardless, solid content and well expressed. |
by Hina
simple, needs a little more elasticity and complexity. Almost there... |
by Frankie
Isn't this the way love usually goes? |
by Brookeღ
So true!! |
by AJ
Hey, I like it. It's good. Keep it up. 5/5 |
by ~*Ley*~
not bad. you overused the word everything though. |
by EoB
So Damn TRUE |