Comments : I Wanted Everything

  • 19 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Everyones saying this is short and you should make it longer....however, it seems to me that it is only missing one line, the last line, as is, just doesn't seem to wrap it up. Regardless, solid content and well expressed.

  • 19 years ago

    by Hina

    simple, needs a little more elasticity and complexity. Almost there...
    ~Hina

  • 19 years ago

    by Frankie

    Isn't this the way love usually goes?

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    So true!!
    I didn't know what I had
    Until I didn't have you
    I have felt that way so many times! Those two lines say it all! Good work! Take Care! Brooke 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by AJ

    Hey, I like it. It's good. Keep it up. 5/5

    ~no more

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    not bad. you overused the word everything though.
    ~Freak~

  • 19 years ago

    by EoB

    So Damn TRUE