by happy days Apr 10, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
The day was so cold, |
by Marjan
loved this one. this is really really excellent. |
by shannon
SOOO AMAZING! loved it so much..5/5! |
by Samantha
I've already read this one, (if you didn't know I'm Likuid Pain) so I'll stick to my previous comment. This is really good. :) |
by cac123
Really heart felt, and sad, it could have been written better i think though, the flow was good, and overall it was a good poem. Really sad. |
by Jason Meres
One very minor thing...."And respects they were paid." For some reason "And all respects, paid." Seems to fit more, but that's most likely just me. Other than that, I loved it....very expressive. |