My Last Words

by Krystin   Apr 10, 2005


I tried to stop this, i didn't want to die

but it seems that all i did was cry

cry for myself, for my love, for hate

and as i write this, i do debate

if i should stay or go; it so painful both ways

o how i miss the good old days

there's just no sign telling me the pain will stop one day

and for that reason alone i have to say

goodbye my friends, my enemies and you

for you have shown me things that no one knew

but at last i must go for i'd rather not stay

my unpleasant welcome has expired today

and maybe it's just my time to go

so don't cry for me don't hang your head low

just try and complete what i am quiting today

I'm going, I'm gone

thats all i have to say.

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  • 19 years ago

    by cant sleep

    this poem was inspirational, made me cry, i apriciate the knife i hold in my hand now, becuz of this poem. good work, yeah. keep up the inspirational poems, that make suicidal people even more suicidal. your ruining america. oh!! your from canada. good work. your ruining us. lol..hahaha. well. i gotta go to class. yeah...me
    p.s. hockey sucks JUST KIDDING!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    The rhyme scheme was basically faultless. Quite the contrary to many other poems of this technique on this site. So well done on a great write, keep it up.

    :D Thanks for commenting on my stuff, and i adore what few pieces of your work i have read so far.

    I will be sure to add you to my favs :)

    <3,
    Kalah.

  • 19 years ago

    by Barbara Jean

    i love this. i give you a 10.. i no how you feel in a way.

    you need to correct this;(and)
    my enemies and and you

    i really enjoyed this alot. your good. im putting you in my favorites and would love to read your new ones in the future..

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