i love this. i give you a 10.. i no how you feel in a way.

you need to correct this;(and)
my enemies and and you

i really enjoyed this alot. your good. im putting you in my favorites and would love to read your new ones in the future..

The rhyme scheme was basically faultless. Quite the contrary to many other poems of this technique on this site. So well done on a great write, keep it up.

:D Thanks for commenting on my stuff, and i adore what few pieces of your work i have read so far.

I will be sure to add you to my favs :)

<3,
Kalah.

this poem was inspirational, made me cry, i apriciate the knife i hold in my hand now, becuz of this poem. good work, yeah. keep up the inspirational poems, that make suicidal people even more suicidal. your ruining america. oh!! your from canada. good work. your ruining us. lol..hahaha. well. i gotta go to class. yeah...me
p.s. hockey sucks JUST KIDDING!!!!!