Waiting For Heavens Reward

I really liked this poem, though I'm completely sure as to why. It was easy to read and the word choice was strong. I really liked the flow and the rhyming, it made it easier to read this poem all the way through. I liked that it was a metaphor and a good one at that though it can be interpreted in different ways.
I see nothing wrong with it. Nice job 5/5

Well for me this metaphor can be interpreted in different ways... but only after reading your explaination is that i can undertand wat ur poem meant...I think u're done a pretty decent job here...i like how u use frost as the metaphor, i think tts unique and it also has a nice flow...great job 5/5 form me

I loved it, it was well done. I thought it was something like that, i was thinking more along the lines of people who are depressed =frost and then once the "moon" comes and protects them, it gets easier for the depressed to get better and go thru the day, because they have somewhere/someone to confide there feelings within, but thats just me.
Good job. Keep it up.
*Chaotic Angel*

Nicely done...I wish I was better at metaphors...o wells...interesting view on life...

xxx

wow...this is amazing! i have no idea why the rating is so low, you know it should definitely be a 5. your writing is so wonderful and i love it. thank you so much for letting me know that i have someone to talk to. that is really reassuring. im feeling kind of better now, well at least less suicidal which is a good thing i guess.

love always *hugs*