I wanted to write a whole poem about a metaphore and i think that i did a decent job. I don't think it is my worst work.

The metaphore is that, when your in darkness it just keeps you feeling good and always like your the person who it is there for.

The person who is number 1 and that you didn't notice that if you had changed from frost to dew, in otherwords from frost = negativity dew = positivity. Then you would have survived that day and you would have been able to live on.

It is basically saying that if you always look at the dark side of things eventually you will die, but if you look at the more positive side of things then you will live longer and be more happy.

Shaun,
I love the metaphorical poetry, nice job. However, I don't agree with your idea here in the comment. Whether you look at the darker side or brighter side of life doesn't change how long you live. I think God has a way with that. But anyhow, nice job, hun! I love you.

Love Always,
Heather M Craig

PS. oh thanks for finally commented on one of my poems for the first time in forever lol

Different poem...doesn't really seem to flow right. Not my favorite but still good!

i liked this a lot, very nice......you are a wonderful poet =).....keep it up ~much love~

-brittnay-

wow...this is amazing! i have no idea why the rating is so low, you know it should definitely be a 5. your writing is so wonderful and i love it. thank you so much for letting me know that i have someone to talk to. that is really reassuring. im feeling kind of better now, well at least less suicidal which is a good thing i guess.

love always *hugs*

Nicely done...I wish I was better at metaphors...o wells...interesting view on life...

xxx

I loved it, it was well done. I thought it was something like that, i was thinking more along the lines of people who are depressed =frost and then once the "moon" comes and protects them, it gets easier for the depressed to get better and go thru the day, because they have somewhere/someone to confide there feelings within, but thats just me.
Good job. Keep it up.
*Chaotic Angel*

Well for me this metaphor can be interpreted in different ways... but only after reading your explaination is that i can undertand wat ur poem meant...I think u're done a pretty decent job here...i like how u use frost as the metaphor, i think tts unique and it also has a nice flow...great job 5/5 form me

I really liked this poem, though I'm completely sure as to why. It was easy to read and the word choice was strong. I really liked the flow and the rhyming, it made it easier to read this poem all the way through. I liked that it was a metaphor and a good one at that though it can be interpreted in different ways.
I see nothing wrong with it. Nice job 5/5