Wow! This poem was definatley one of a kind..for one I have never read any poem about marriage and two I have never read one written so well! This poem was describing the perfect marriage and I wish everyones could be that way! What a wonderful poem you have written! Keep up the great Job please! 5/5
Kind Regards,
~Chelsey~

Amit,

I've read this poem nearly 7-10 times, counting when you emailed it to me as well. And I still love it. Nice job, and anytime in the future I can help you with a poem, ask me. 5/5

Love Always,
Heather M Craig

This is awesome, Amit. Great write! I loved it and enjoyed reading it. Thanx for resubmitting!
car

P.S. thanx for the comments on my poems... greatly appriciated!

Amit, this is absolutely beautiful. You have a wonderful way with words and have described a marriage made in heaven, if only every marriage was this way........ loved it.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

ps.... thanks for your comments, they mean alot to me. And in your words, Always Believe in Love......

excellent job my friend!! i really really loved it!!!!! wow~ it's so good~~ u go amit!! keep up the great work...~ take care, love ya~
*Brittany*

this poem flowed beautifully, from beginning to end. it captivated me and wanted me to keep reading. beautiful poem. you have an amazing talent. keep up the great work. stay safe, strong, and healthy!
AntiSocial16
5/5

Fantastic!!! <----As always:)

hi amit,
i've read a few of your poems on this site and I have to say you are one of the last romantics.
love your poems
gemmax

This is a beautiful poem an abstouely beautiful poem! Love it Amit Touched my heart! That's how love is supposed to be! I hope at the end that I am as happy as my parents they have been married almost 27 years and they still act like they are newly weds! But another great poem Keep it up and I'll keep reading your poems!

BEAUTIFUL!

That was such a beautiful poem amit, well done..

Beautiful Amit, True love is truly a blessing and feels our soul with those feelings that is truly unforgettable. Beautiful. hugs, lots of love *Ann*

great poem. Thanx for commentign on my poems. It means a lot. Have a nice day:)

Hey, I've definately been gone for a while but I see that you've kept up the good work. Its amazing how you can seemilngly never tire of writing about love. Its a beautiful thing. -Katrina

this poem was great amit...I mean I'm far from marriage because I'm young but I understood it because u explained marriage in a perfect way! Great Job!
~NaNa~

Kinda hard to read through but still a nice poem good attempt.

hey i gotta say... freat poem... i love d reading it....keep it up...

I love all of your stuff! I'm soooo adding u 2 my favs list!

Hey thanks 4 the comment i didnt write that it is acually a song its just the way i wanted to show someone i care :) thanks i luv to no that ppl are reading my stuff

this is at a different level to most stuff you read on here. 5/5