You. . .

by sammi   Apr 11, 2005


Horizontal lines
Blood shines
straight from my wrists

You see my tears
You are my fears
You are happy
Why am I so sappy?

I have more then you
But your happy inside
My happiness runs and hides

As the wind blows
My blood flows
In horizontal lines
My blood shines.

*please comment and rate i think i did really bad this time*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Rachel E F Allen

    As someone who lives with scars honey please try to remember that no matter what you may feel you have done wrong in your life you have an amazing gift when it comes to poetry. What a shame it would be if those arms and hands that house your pencil are scarred with your pain. If you can channel all this energy for self hatred into writing you will discover that something beautiful is inside you that enables you to be so expressive. Maybe it is my maternal instinct that comes out with you but I hope you have someon there who you can talk to without judgement. If not get in contact with me and I will listen. I wish you only happiness to help you escape your demons xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Don't normally read poems about cutting but this was well written...nice job...Hope all is well....Take Care! :) Welcome to the site....

  • 19 years ago

    by Angie

    You did good, I liked it. Keep on writing....... 5/5

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

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