well b4 i 4get let me start off with

All I want to do is kiss you
Hug you express my love for you
You have no idea what I go through
Every second of the day

its good this part dosnt really flow maybe add its true at the end

All I want to do is kiss you
Hug you express my love for you
You have no idea what I go through
Every second of the day, its true

its your choice but to me it flows better then but anyways back to your poem WOW loved it so sweet the opening two paragraphs i was like wow i imagined everything so sweet and heatfelt LOVE IT >>5/5<<
bec

smoothe passion unique format i like variety though