hey, great writing i love the topic, brown eyes and blue eyes are sexy, but theres sumthing bowt green eyes!!!! lol anyway sweet topic, i know whats its like missing someone!! xxxxxxxxx

this is so cute, please read and comment mine when u get the chance, i'd like to know what u think!!
much love,
-Mols

Nice poem, very well written. Keep writing!
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit