Hey you guys...I am new. I am not much of a poem writer. I try though. I LOVE poetry. If I could get pointers it would be great. This actually happened. My birthday was Friday April 8, and well the guy I liked came over and it happened under the stars *sigh* Sorry I am a hopeless romantic too....probably why I like poetry so much. But please be critical. I would love to become a better poem writer. Thanks everyone

keep going honey - i liked it xx

aint bad.. havent herd one like this before. good...interesting also.. dont no what else to say right now. let me think of something. but 5!!

i love this poem

i think this is good. different but good