by HOLLY ARMER Apr 11, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
My thought's are racing, body's tense. |
by No Motiv?
Incredible poem! "Caught in turmoil and raped by fear" was my favorite part. It seems this poem was flawlessly imagined by a beautiful mind. You brought it across wonderfully. |
I Can Relate 100% I Loved The Flow Of This Poem Every Word Of It Was Engoyable To Read Excellent Job 5.0 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo |
by Harry Bryant
great job, Holly, it is so good to see you writing again, and sharing those thoughts with us, keep up the good work, girl and we will keep reading, as always Your friend Harry |
by Forever29
Stong poem. Well written. I love the way it all came together at the end! 5! |
by Timothy r
Fantastic Holly, it flowed so well, you should be proud, I know Iam. Love, Tim |