this is an awesome poem, with a great pace to it

Gone away, I'm no longer here.
Caught in turmoil and raped by fear.

Cast into tears and unable to mend.
Living my life as Melancholy's friend!

---I love those couplets! Nice job, looks like we've done away with your writer's block yay! =) ---Keep it up!

Love ya
Heather

Fantastic Holly, it flowed so well, you should be proud, I know Iam. Love, Tim

Stong poem. Well written. I love the way it all came together at the end! 5!

great job, Holly, it is so good to see you writing again, and sharing those thoughts with us, keep up the good work, girl and we will keep reading, as always Your friend Harry

I Can Relate 100% I Loved The Flow Of This Poem Every Word Of It Was Engoyable To Read Excellent Job 5.0 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Incredible poem! "Caught in turmoil and raped by fear" was my favorite part. It seems this poem was flawlessly imagined by a beautiful mind. You brought it across wonderfully.

Good job.

5/5.