Stepped away

by NK   Apr 11, 2005


I don’t know why you did what u did
But then you turn around and hid
You gave me signs then turned away
You stepped away from me that day

I had only seen you once before
But I know that this is sure
You gave me signs then turned away
You stepped away from me that day

I want to see your pretty face
For you I want to win a race
You gave me signs then turned away
You stepped away from me that day

I want you here in my arms
I want to feel your girlish charm
You gave me signs then turned away
You stepped away from me that day

You did what you did and I’m confused why
But come back to me before you die
You gave me signs then turned away
You stepped away from me that day

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  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    meaningful....good poem....5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    Very nice poem.

    I like the repetition of the last 2 lines in each Stanza. It really emphasises their meaning. Can relate to those specific lines too.

    Very well done, you should keep writing you've great talent. But, be careful not to force rhymes out. Usually, you can tell when a writer's done it. Perhaps try to write a none-rhyming poem. That way you can put across your emotions, without having to compromise your thoughts because of rhyme. Just a suggestion.

    Take good care of yourself.
    All my love,
    Laura.

  • 19 years ago

    by JaSoNs LiL bAbY

    great poem ;)
    you should check out mine some time

  • 19 years ago

    by Katie

    Love the poem. great job!!

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