by Steve_G
i know how this girl feels, the scars on my arms will never leave. this is a great poem, i hope to read more. |
by Jackie
Great job... No forced rhyming, very nice = ) ..Hope it's the first of many. |
by Emilia
5/5!! Great work!! |
by Elissa
This was really good, your a good writer. Keep writing |
I loved the message. |
i liked this poem.... the girl reminds me of my self... thou im still living but my scars will always be there... sad poem but very well written.... mad props for u... |
Hmm.. Very thought provoking. Not ever read a poem like this before. Especially enjoyed the first haiku. Very well written, again. You should write more, you're very good. |
by Matt
this poem braught a tear to my eye i loved it, really good moral n everything, ive added u 2 my favs coz i love ur poems. |
by Tricksy
Hey Cut, Love u and like ur poems! |
by Lost Girl
WOW! |
by Becca1111
wow .... :O |
by kkly
Wow,,really nice... |
by Becca1111
O.O..wow....nicely done...5/5 |
by pain is me
Your style is amazing. |
by The Reaper
Very Nicely done,keep it up |