Very deep indeed. If this is your first poem, its a great start.

Thanks for sharing it.

Man I'm so sorry to hear that! I hope everything is good with you:) If you ever need someone to talk to my e-mail addy is metalchickoz17@yahoo.com ur prolly like freak lol but with everything else aside that really was an awsome poem.

This is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo awesome

I liked this poem, the only thing is in this part:

My faith is leaving,
as is your breathing,
How I hate him and his gun,
It wasn't meant to end up like this,

the last part doesn't rhyme and it threw off the flow of your poem. Other than that it was an excellent write.