This reminds me of my first kiss. I loved the way you wrote this. Keep it up 5/5! Read some of my work if you have time sometime!

Hey Great poem! I loved it. I'll add ya to my favorites and keep checkin back in with ur poems! 5/5!
Love Bunchez!
~*Mya*~

i'm so sorry john, i luv u, but this girls not worth it, john
luv ya forever
jo

umm is this to an ex gf or something lol? this poem was kinda sad, really good though. so far the poems i have read of urs are wonderful, feel lucky cause i wanna go through all of your poems. well ima go read more. :)
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