WOW! Out of all your new peices this one is my fave..The way yo laid this all out is unbelievable..quite a catchy title you have to..at first it made me think you had a writers block..after reading I found it not that at all..and the story behind it I owuld have never guessed...it sucks about your friend but you came out with a brilliant peice!
Love you and your new poems,
~Chelsey~

this poem is amazing, i really loved it... i tried to comment it earlier but i don't think it worked... anyway... ur writing is so beautiful and it's just great. keep it up, don't ever stop
much love,
-Mols

Okay Mr Plainm, thanks for the constructive feedback I'd love to get your help with editting it - I'll email you