I don't think it sucks, its really really good and i like it alot. Keep on writing .

that didnt suck at all it was really good way better then any of mine

I dont know whether it annoys you or not, everyone saying 'it didnt suck at all!!' so im not gonna say that, keep writing tho, hopefully it helps, its always helped me

hey that was a really good poem. i've felt that way plenty of times and i feel that way now. you did a good job and keep writting