good job, really liked it. :)
makes u stop and think bout lots of things. but what if your mind tells you an opposite thing to do, and u know that if u'll' follow it, u'd get successful. and if you'll follow your heart advise u can loose everything? just was thinking of that. i think it's interesting how life puts us in interesting situations. :)
but you did great ob anyways. :)
~Me~

Not bad, but youve done much better