Libby,
This was an amazing story well conveyed into the poem.You are an incredible poet.Please accept my 5.Thanks for your comments on mine.Jeff

Wow, you have unique style. I really enjoyed this, and the flow was very good too! Keep on writing, 5/5 for this poem.
Satuxxa

Libby, how sad and heartfelt. Beautiful writing and I enjoy your work. hugs, lots of love, *Ann*

Libby,
your poems are great, you really get the readers attention, and you keep it....You have a beginning, a middle, and an ending, incredaible thats hard to do in poetry....Great job, keep it up, Love ya Becky