Outstanding! 5/5 all the imagery seeped in my mind i could see it plain as day! lol Great job!

OMG this is my favvoritte now!! I love this one...so deep and powerful..emotional...makes me want to cry a bit..i love you hun..and I hope you never go to the valley of death...you mean a lot to me hun...this is an incredible write..please never stop...hope to talk to you soon xxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

fantastic poem...

this is by far the best poem i have seen. its so visual and beutiful. and really sad! and dark and.....oh i cant explain it. its amazing!!!

Hey Benji, I love your poems is effing awesome muhahaha.
But just coz this is a good poem doesnt mean you win our lil colour fight- Its not my fault I can diffientuate them lol....Well its an awesome poem boy, well done, love SNTR.