Please stop the memories

by *~*Heart.Shaped.Rose~*~   Apr 12, 2005


I know i said I'm over it
I'm no longer filled with sadness
but it can never leave me
and its sending me into madness,
its sitting there silently waiting
a dark shadow in my head
waiting until I'm feeling down
waiting until it can be fed,
i feel it start to come over me
as i look back into my past
it wants to come back soon
and its starting to come back fast,
so i block of all my memories
of everything i left behind
everything i so dearly loved
never for it to find,
So i beg you now please
don't ever bring up my friends
for i want to stay strong
i don't want this to be were it ends.

you know who you are...

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  • 19 years ago

    by EoB

    Good poem...

    I've read hundreds of poems containing the same message, but this one was mubh better...

    You manage to leave out all the clichès, which is a very good thing...

    IT had a good flow, and the rhyming scheme work quite ok, but at some points it seemed a little forced...

    I have read some of your poems, before, and this is not among your best..

    Keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Good poem although i found it a little confusing in places but nothing serious and then one more thing is that it started to lose my attention near the end but i still thought it was very good but i'm sure you can do much because you are talented and have so much potential:) Never give up and keep writing:)

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    hey....it was really good! you have an amazing tallent! i gave it a 5/5

    thanks for commenting on my poem!
    -amanda

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