hey....it was really good! you have an amazing tallent! i gave it a 5/5

thanks for commenting on my poem!
-amanda

Good poem although i found it a little confusing in places but nothing serious and then one more thing is that it started to lose my attention near the end but i still thought it was very good but i'm sure you can do much because you are talented and have so much potential:) Never give up and keep writing:)

Good poem...

I've read hundreds of poems containing the same message, but this one was mubh better...

You manage to leave out all the clichès, which is a very good thing...

IT had a good flow, and the rhyming scheme work quite ok, but at some points it seemed a little forced...

I have read some of your poems, before, and this is not among your best..

Keep it up