Raise your fist

by deadnalone   Apr 12, 2005


Raise your fist, try to scare her,
I know it won’t work,
You bring it now, down hard on her,
She yelps from how it hurts,

You were threatened by her,
And you were mystified,
How could she be better?
Was that intelligence in her eyes?

A gleam of it yes, that’s right,
For that is what she’s like,
She is better than you ever were,
Who cares she cant ride a bike,

Bring your fist down one more time,
Been pushed to the limit,
You can’t take her brilliance,
And she can’t take your shit,

She will not hit you back,
With her hand or fist,
Take one last look round the last,
She’ll take half of this,

So now you are left,
With no money, car or love,
And guess what she’s no longer under you,
With your fist held high above.

*All votes and comments greatly appreciated as always.*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Brilliant hun!! Loved it! You're such a star :-) xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    liked how you explained feelings from both sides and the poem itself was brilliant as usual

    always here :) lu -x-x-x-