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by AshBnash   Apr 12, 2005


I'm not perfect
I'll never be
He thinks that I am
but what does he see?

How can I tell him
that I'm not that great.
The person I am now
Is a person I hate

I try so hard
to not let him down.
I try to smile
and try not to frown.

In his eyes
I can see
All the things
I should be

He knows me
He knows the part
of me that I keep
locked up in my heart.

He's so perfect
in my eyes,
Whenever we part
a part of me dies.

Next to him
I feel so small
and that's not
because he's tall

He's gone through so much,
Trials so long
I wish I could be
just as strong.

He's always right there
when I need someone to hold
When he holds me near,
I feel worth more than gold.

Without his touch
I don't know where I'd be
I would feel like
I was lost at sea.

I just hope
he never leaves me behind
Another love like his
would be so hard to find.

I know it kinda really sucks, but I was told to write again, so I did.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Reflection | noitcelfeR

    Hey cool!! Both Dusti and Nancy commented!! :-) I loved it. No matter what you think, you have a talent for this. I love you, Ashley. I always have, and I always will.

  • 19 years ago

    by cant sleep

    i love this poem. no lie. i just wanted a.j to read it, cuz i thought it was the best you have done. and the reason i cut your name out, was cuz i wanted him to guess. that was really good. write what you feel, and your poems will turn out like this. beautiful....nancy