I have felt that way myself! U showed great true emotion in this poem and I think that made it even better! Very well written! Take Care! Brooke 5/5

It was really great. The poem was well written and it flows very well. True emotions show.=) Great work!!! 5/5 =)

Can u plz comment on my new poem titled My Story PArt II thanks!!!=)

For some reason this poem seems like its all been jammed together....like, you tried to put too many words in one sentence. My favorite part was about the tattered whispered screams. Good write though, around everything else. 4/5.

wow great poem very powerful
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