My Lady In Black

by Timothy Bledsoe   Apr 13, 2005


I see her from afar
I approach but she's not there
She's in my head
Her memory follows me everywhere

Driving in my car
She's sitting in the next seat
Her hand in mine
This feeling can not be beat

But I remember she's gone
My eyes feel the heat
This feeling of love
Time can not defeat

I gave her everything
From my time to my soul
I try to forget her
But she's taken her toll

She loved me once
I loved her back
She owns my heart
My lady in black

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  • 19 years ago

    by Deathcanwait

    Woop! thas well good! its sad mind :| but good all the same :)

    keep hope

    Matt

  • 19 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    I really like your style...Great job! 5/5!

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashli

    beautiful ending! i just can't get enough of your writing technique! keep it up! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    not your best but still pretty good 4/5. i feel it was a bit too short, a bit rushed.
    ~Freak~

  • 19 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    She loved me once
    I loved her back
    She owns my heart
    My lady in black

    I like that line, well done.

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