Always by my side

by Candice   Apr 13, 2005


*This poem is decatied to my best friend Kayla...

This teenage girl
this teenage girl is so much more

shes always by my side
she holds my hand when I'm in pain
she keeps me safe
she calms me down, relaxes me
she makes me smile

this teenage girl
this teenage girl means the world to me
this teenage girl is my best friend
this teenage girl is my hero

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  • 19 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    That was good.

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Not bad for a first try! But you could make it better....or for future reference (I'm not saying change it) give examples. Explain how she makes you smile and relaxes you. Tell me why she's your best friend. See where I am going with this? :) And use different words instead of she / he so much. My dearest friend or something. Anyhoo sorry if I bugged you! I am looking forward to reading more. I am going to add you to my favorites so I can see about your next shot at poetry! Welcome to the site! Enjoy!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Angie

    Not bad for your first poem..... I liked it, keep writing...

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*^*~ longing to belong ~*^*~

    It's quite good, it might be better if it was longer. Just my honest opinion. Charlie x

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