This was and awesome poem tina.... I hope you feel better soon if you ever just need someone to talk to im there.
Love always,
Elissa

Hey, this is really good..and i can relate!! Keep ur head up....great poem!! keep on writing and take care..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

GRL II FEEL U.. IT HURTS LIFE SEEMS HARD U DINK U CANT DO0H NUTHIN TO MAKE ALL DA PAIN GO AWAY,, BEEN THROUGH DAT.. II HAD FRINEDS WHO ACUALLY REALLIE CARE.. N II HELD ON U SHOULD TO0H PEPO CARE ITZ DEY DUNT SHOW IT AITE TAKE CARE

Great poem, had a really good flow.

wow thats excellent gurl, the poem flows fabulously 5.0! xox

wow that was totali wicked, hope your feeling ok soon, lots of love sent out for ya
xoxo bam
5/5

wow i know how u feel i love to cut but i know i gotta stop

lovely poem.not lovely scars..... its good... very goood

hey i hope that you are aite. be stong aite. plz stay safe. i got faith in you.plz becarful aite. great poem though. i think you wrote it perfect. Much Love always

Nick

wow, you have amazing talent. Thats a really good poem. It flows very nicely, the beauty in the poem shows. I hope you are okay though. or will be... xox
Robyn

hey, i kno where you're coming from. Thats exactly how I feel. Good job, and Im sorry things are ruff.

wonderful. i absolutley love it

wow this is really good, just to let you know i am going through this too so if you ever wanna talk to anybody about it i'm always here just drop me an email. your a great poet. keep up the awesome work and keep your head up. hugs and love-hayley
dc_dancer07@hotmail.com

Beautiful poem. Maybe sometime you could stop by and read some of my stuff? I really like this poem. 5 for you:)

Eden

good i like it if u ever wanna talk.5/5 poem

Wow....So well written though extremely sad!! I hope all is well!! Please take care of yourslef!!! Great write....5/5 :)

fantastic poem, really fast flowing which worked well. keep it up!

stay strong and take care always, lu -x-x-x-

Well done! I adored the emotion you conveyed in this! Keep it up~Holly

5.0 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

woah....that was one of the best poems i think i'v seen on here....real deep.....