Another awesome poem! I can relate to this much. I love your writing style. xo
Becca

Lovely poem, sad and so full of feelings from your heart...I really felt your frustrations in this one...Great poem, keep writing!!

....Speechless...Amazing

really loved it..

Awesome poem.. again well written.

Wow that was amazing it all fell in place to well i felt like it was happening to me .. i love the poem so much .. i love ur writting style and your work .. i think it's all amazing ..and this poem just wow ..

keep it all comeing

Yep..poems save people...poems rocks!!! So r urs...

I luv this poem I can realate I give it a 5/5 awsome so much pain and feeling

Hey i love this poem! i was wondering if maybe i could copy it and put it on my website... i'll keep your copyright on it... and my website has a no-right click thing so ppl cant take it... but i wont copy it until you give me permission... you can email me at lla92@hotmail.com ... my website is www.xanga.com/blondie_avrilfan
talk to ya later,
lucy

Your are such a good writer!!!

I absoloutly loved this poem. I can kind of relate to what you're trying to say. Not completely but for the most part I can. I hope your life isnt as hard as this poem makes it seems.

Beautiful writing by the way. Wouldnt change a thing.

Thats soooo great!! I LOVE IT .. it a really good but sad poem!

I liked this a lot. If your descriptions could have been a little more precise then I would have LOVED it a lot. I'm big on deep descriptions and yours were good. :D

I love you

Again, you took my breath away. The flow was awsome and it all made since.(which a lot of people's poems on here don't lol)
But seriously, 5/5 job.

-Liz-
~muahs to all~
ps: thanks for all of your comments on my poems, glad you enjoied them, you're on my fave's also.

I feel as though I am feeling the same as I read this and maybe because it describes the way a lonely soul feels each time they are haunted by their misery.

Omg!!!!!!!!!!!!

Flows so well! It's almost sing-song-like.